Blade of Determination- An Undertale Retelling

No matter who you are, if you have read this, feel free to leave any comments—I am happy to engage with you. I also hope you can share your thoughts and suggestions about my story. - from the author.   

New up and coming writers are very fresh with their ideas. It's still in it's starting phase, with only 12 chapters, but it feels like it already has a clear plan going forward. The characters are human-like, with intense annoyance and cursing like what you'd expect from kids with a high-school background. It's also great that the the main character has a young personality and isn't too serious.It feels like it's going in a great direction, and with the promise of a female character in the synopsis, I think it'll be a great story! Hopefully it's not going to be a romance-centric story, considering the constant flowing of romance in this generation.

This book had potential but so many bad decisions ruined it i had to sit through 3 chapters of filler face slapping to go through more face slapping for the mc to have seggs with some random person that has no significance to the story besides the lemon chapter

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A truly great book, absolutely not to be missed. My friend, you deserve this praise. Everything is so perfect, it reminds me of the emotions I felt when I first started reading novels. It's simply wonderful.

The girl in front of him, god, he didn't even know her name, pulled him toward her, and all thoughts of Catrina disappeared.

The more energy you contain the longer you can use it for spells or abilities, the power of a spell is dependant on your <Intellect>  but that can be broken down into two parts, your knowledge of arcane arts and your mastery over the energy in your body. Having a durable and strong body will assist you in performing more powerful spells, being an elf you are naturally stronger than your human counterparts but since you were just born your innate talents will not come forth for a few more weeks...or months.

  - 5!